ChendaWrites: A Poem for Monday

A Poem for Monday

I fainted today on BART

It was a strange experience

I was was an hour late for work

My supervisor didn’t know

so she asked me: how would I

make up the time?

She was exasperated

said fine, but with a sigh

In the back of her mind

I think, there was a question

about my irresponsibility

my tendency to be late, which I knew

so I sat there quietly, not saying much

playing with the fringe of my jacket

feeling, the rough texture 

between my fingers

I sit at my desk now

impatient and anxious

unsettled somehow

sipping slowly on a cold bottle of water

that I got from a stranger

thinking, about life, the random things that happen

the man offering me his newspaper

to fan my clammy face

another, giving up her seat for me

while I waited for the EMT

everyone late, on my account

but they all just smiled

I guess we’re all just running away

either away or toward

each other or ourselves

We want so badly to understand

to be understood, to see

despite our faltering eye-sights

Sometimes, when I rub my eyes 

with the back of my hand

the grit getting inside, I can’t tell

if things are getting better or worst

if I’m happy or sad

Our manners can be so stiff

gruff and oddly formal

our bodies making tedious movements

by the firelight, trying to find an excuse

When we sit with one another

the heat in our faces, do we 

watch each other shyly?

Or, turn ourselves away?

Try not to catch sparks

singe ourselves, on one another

sing songs that sound 

too solemn, like hymns

We catch sight of ourselves

in the fading light, our roughened skin

dried tough by air and time

The facade cracking slowly

reminding us of who we are, who we were

who we could be, in heaven and on earth

our human desires, these universal things

can be, the work of God

or the work of people

unattainable or straightforward

These questions of faith

to which we avail ourselves to the sky

flail our backs for our mistakes

offer sacraments for sacrilege

pray to the mountains 

But, I honestly believe

that it can be, much simpler than that

a hand, just like any other hand

ordinary and unassuming

beautiful, wiping gently away

the tears in our eyes

the question marks on our faces.


© 2010-2025 Chenda Duong

Note: “And it's only doubts that we're counting
On fingers broken long ago
I read with every broken heart
We should become more adventurous”

— Rilo Kiley: “More Adventurous” (2004)